Thursday, April 26, 2012

Jake Wanted the Cop

Here's "47 Days," a new story, in The Utopian. Also be sure to check out "Animals," in the same issue, by my former student Jaime Karnes.

My fortune from Su Xing House in Philadelphia tonight

6 comments:

Bill Matthews said...

A great piece Paul. A wonderful meditation on desire and identity.

I'd be careful about those Fortune cookie musings. I got one just this afternoon that said, "Everything will go your way now." Which leads me to conclude that later, I'm really gonna get screwed. Likewise on yours, I'm reminded (to paraphrase) of something someone else once said: sitting on top of the world? Sitting at the North Pole--where's that at?

Paul Lisicky said...

Thanks, Bill. No need to worry about literalism and fortune cookie musings. I just liked the way those words talked to Jake's situation in the story.

Bill Matthews said...

Re: Fortune cookies and literal fortunes
This may or may not be related, but I get a kick out of it anyway:
http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2005/05/11/AR2005051101772.html

Paul Lisicky said...

Thanks! I better keep an eye on those "number combinations."

David said...

Paul
not a spare breath in your new story
and the emotional immediacy of your find writing literally sets the reader on edge
excellent work, Paul

Paul Lisicky said...

Thank you, David!