Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Sweet Door in the Rosebush

This Wren
Paul Otremba
from The Currency

For no reason at all this wren, this little mound
of pencil shavings. But what appears is too bleared,

too gray sluice of clouds covering the window
so the kitchen goes dim. So this wren eating beneath

scratches of juniper, of field grass, little mounds
of graphite in the beak. For no reason I let

the sauce simmer, the reduction gone syrup.
Then she enters, asking about the drawing, a turkey,

five fingers dragging a wind through the grass,
and the wren goes on with the little mounds of seed.

More questions arise about the timing, the meat of it,
the delicacy of a still, cold center. For no reason at all,

rosemary, Money Jungle, track “Fleurette Africaine,”
and the wren finds a hole in the rosebush,

while she places heavy plates in orbit around the table,
singing a wordless “Fleurette Africaine,” a little wren,

a little monster, sweet door in the rosebush.
For no reason at all a monster in the wren’s nest.

2 comments:

C. Dale said...

I love this poem and all of its tangential logics. Tried to buy the book at AWP but it was old out.

Paul Lisicky said...

I love it too and have been obsessed with it since last night, when I found it in a Pebble Lake Review archive. I don't know if this is the version that ended up in the book, but it's something. And "tangential logics" is a good way to put it.